If one windy day upon the Altar standing gleeful in a tarty-red dress i would want nothing more in this world but you be on my right, just as gleeful back.
@Aduhi.... Thnx. People tend to flood their writings with Huge Dictionary words, at times we are caught up trying to understan the words so much than appreciating the actual work, i chose my poetry to convey through the language of man, simple yet true from the heart. A work is a reflection of ourselves, and thats how i want my life to be - Simple but True :)
This one's for The One... although i havnt found him yet :)
ReplyDeleteIf one windy day upon the Altar
ReplyDeletestanding gleeful in a tarty-red dress
i would want nothing more in this world
but you be on my right, just as gleeful back.
Pasal ka nei chak tawh :(
Ha2 nei phot la chn ka nei ve ang... :)
ReplyDeleteAh!! Sweet Wedding...
heheeeeeeeeee kan insom ve ngei chu angai ang
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet, but beautiful and deep. What I liked about it is your use of simple words, arranged just perfectly so. Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteva haiku deuh ve!
ReplyDeletetha lutuk
@Aduhi....
ReplyDeleteThnx. People tend to flood their writings with Huge Dictionary words, at times we are caught up trying to understan the words so much than appreciating the actual work, i chose my poetry to convey through the language of man, simple yet true from the heart.
A work is a reflection of ourselves, and thats how i want my life to be - Simple but True :)
zualbonez... not haiku... KAiku lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
ReplyDeletehey hey go easy for that black dress guy ok. Nice piece of work.
ReplyDeletethen i would hold thy hand,
ReplyDeleteand promise thee....
with this ring....i thee wed
...my love...my life...my all...
He2 sweet huh? luv ur lines Mr.X :)
ReplyDeleteahhh..... life is indeed sweet....