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Friday, September 9, 2011

Beautiful












She is beautiful standing in her white
Crowned with a veil beautiful to her waist,
She wears a multitudinous smile
That glitters like a thousand fireflies.
And there she graces herself to his side
Solemnly surrendering to the Holy rite
While myself sit and stare thinking
That maybe a few years before leaving,
This girl could have been anybody
Could have been my own story.
He is beautiful standing beside her
With happiness nothing could possibly mar,
The Holy mother of Christ was no less adored
As he adores the one that claims him lord.
And when vows are said and all is done
A kiss binds them forever as one.
Amidst the merry children and crowded church
Comes the newly wedded beneath the flowery arch,
Beauty has many wipe their joyful tears
Mine falls for something else.
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18 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2011 at 9:22 PM

    Beauty has many wipe their joyful tears
    Mine falls for something else.."Like"

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2011 at 9:22 PM

    nice one!!! keep up the good work...

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  3. em_emySeptember 9, 2011 at 9:25 PM

    hmm ......... rual ti awt ve tep lawm..:)
    mawi khawp mai......

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  4. JonathanSeptember 9, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    khawnge i zir bik a???? pew2 thei khawp mai!

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  5. Bd ChawngthuSeptember 9, 2011 at 10:08 PM

    Ha2 thnx guys... i luv this pic and how it rhymes with the poem... makes me wanna fall in love :)

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  6. Ab-aSeptember 9, 2011 at 10:43 PM

    Nupui ka neih hun ah lo resite chhuak dawn nia aw.. Alter bul ah... (~_^)

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2011 at 10:52 PM

    kool!!!! keep it comin

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  8. sophisticatedly yoursSeptember 9, 2011 at 11:54 PM

    I love how you show the complexity of relationship between a man and a woman in this poem. I love how your poem portrays the institution of marriage that produced you and me. I think this poem deals with gender issues in a very subtle yet serious way. the subtle part for me happens in the way the woman in the 1st stanza as told by the narrator: of how she surrenders "to the Holy rite." However, what I could really connect to is the thought process of the narrator, whose life do not seem to be bounded by no gender issues (as found in the final line "Mine falls for something else.").
    It is really a well constructed poem. Congrats!

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  9. Bd ChawngthuSeptember 10, 2011 at 5:24 PM

    Thank you Goosh^ Muah Muah!!!

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  10. AlxenvyothiCSeptember 10, 2011 at 8:16 PM

    Weinch !! Another touching poeM again.. Nice and AwesoMe !! Keep it Up
    (\_/)
    ( •,•)

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2011 at 5:44 PM

    me read it.. me likey... tho this one be false.. now :)

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  12. AlejendroSeptember 16, 2011 at 1:50 PM

    Eh! Ava damlai lusun 'aw' ve :-P Be strong.. :-D

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  13. Bd ChawngthuSeptember 16, 2011 at 3:27 PM

    Alejendro i inhmeh viau lo maw? :)

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  14. AlejendroSeptember 19, 2011 at 2:52 PM

    Nang hi 'Love' lam hi i lana i la na ve thei riau in ka hria. In ngaizawng thut mai ila kan inhmeh viau ang. :-P

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  15. diziiralteSeptember 21, 2011 at 9:27 PM

    wfis ban hah deuha han chhiar chuh ...hah a ti dam sawng sawng mai...

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  16. MizohicanOctober 4, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    Beautiful! Simply beautiful! :)

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  17. AnonymousOctober 5, 2011 at 5:59 PM

    hei chu va tha ve.....beautifull!

    zualbonez

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  18. Bd ChawngthuOctober 5, 2011 at 9:45 PM

    Thanx @Mizohican :)
    Zualbonez lah hi nick hrang2 hian i rawn comment a, a chang leh anonymous ni thul :)
    Nevertheless thank you guys for being part of this blog^

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