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Thursday, March 1, 2012

In A Dream


In a dream I see us looking fine
Holding hands, flying above the sea
A surprise we finally cross the line
In a dream it’s just you and me.

Dancing among the clouds
With your long lost guitar at hand,
You sing to me the sweetest round
Of tunes in soft little love strands.

Happy thoughts brace my heart a shine
To your tune all my worries flee,
And where your sunshine meets mine
Is where our heaven shall be.

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27 comments:

  1. BsaMarch 1, 2012 at 7:28 PM

    As always a great read. Fresh, Clear, simple, yet sweet and tender in ways more than One... I wished this was meant for me :)

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  2. AnonymousMarch 1, 2012 at 7:33 PM

    nice yaaar :P

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  3. AnonymousMarch 1, 2012 at 8:08 PM

    nicely done

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  4. cdfanaiMarch 2, 2012 at 2:07 AM

    nice rhyme... liked it...

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  5. Francis lalfakzualaMarch 2, 2012 at 8:03 PM

    Simple WOrds, Rhyme's simple n easy to understand!!
    Nice one...

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  6. MoiaMarch 2, 2012 at 8:06 PM

    awww...so sweet...but i think you scanned my mind... :-P great work, babe... <3 <3 <3

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  7. AmteaMarch 3, 2012 at 12:39 AM

    it produces a bittersweet feeling for me..i can relate myself in it so much that i get emotional while reading it..the poem is so refreshing n bubbly and i can imagine myself sitting under a greenish bough beside a sparkling pond..it produces a sad feeling in me because all these descriptions are but a dream!..i really wanna share all these with someone i really love..wink!!..i Love it and you know it dear,,keep it up!:)

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    1. Bd ChawngthuMarch 3, 2012 at 12:42 AM

      Thanks Mate,the poem is indeed sweet... but yes it is but just another dream :D

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  8. Ben lalrinmawia PachuauMarch 3, 2012 at 12:45 AM

    I like that "long lost guitar" it somehow reveals that the melody of love you shared with someone may have started a long time ago and its impossible to recount the exact date of your love making! He2
    its just my perception My dear senior!

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    1. Bd ChawngthuMarch 3, 2012 at 1:00 AM

      "Long lost guitar" meant a different thing from the point i'm writing... mahse its good u have your own opinion :D thanks!

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  9. xSpoNgeBoBxMarch 3, 2012 at 1:18 AM

    In a dream it’s just you and me <---- Imbu. Very soitiamlo.. :D KZP

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  10. Bd ChawngthuMarch 3, 2012 at 1:25 AM

    Ha2 engtia tih tur nge. Me and you? :-)

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  11. Ellis H.PachuauMarch 7, 2012 at 1:05 AM

    Chhiar a manhla thin e...a ropui e... nang nge nge...

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  12. H.VangchhiaMarch 7, 2012 at 10:06 AM

    Good one

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  13. AlejendroMarch 7, 2012 at 10:45 AM

    But when I awoke, I was mistaken
    Life is so very much complicated
    And you are nowhere to be seen
    When I awoke from the dream..

    hihihi me like :-)

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  14. Bd ChawngthuMarch 7, 2012 at 3:36 PM

    Ha2 nice. Nya i had'nt written in a long time. Twas indeed a long break. Hope i still continue to write, if not in dreams. Thnx for reading :-)

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  15. Lal Jo-aMarch 9, 2012 at 1:04 PM

    I think I've landed in your dream.... Stumbled upon a planet with two sun, and where people fly!

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  16. AnonymousMarch 14, 2012 at 12:05 AM

    ishhhh...and i am the nth person to comment..how do i follow ? :(

    -bonez

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    1. Bd ChawngthuMarch 16, 2012 at 2:19 PM

      Ha2 There's a link on the right side to follow.... :)

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  17. AnonymousMay 27, 2012 at 2:08 AM

    I phuah thiam khawp mai.

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  18. Marama VarteJune 21, 2012 at 11:54 PM

    Such words and beauty in it. You can't help but start imagining your own little scene.

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  19. skogooFebruary 6, 2014 at 10:49 PM

    Wow!! I like the picture...and you never cease to amaze me with your rhymes and your word play......
    Donnomuch....

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