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Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Traces of Hope



To search for water in the Sahara dry
The sun steals your sweat
Your body reduced to the sands
A tail of sting beneath your trial
Your mind fails you
Your eyes hail a mirage
You rise to fall, again
And yet again.

Your senses withered to dust
Your moist transpired to air
You crave for a drop
Everytime you lose a drop
You shiver for the moon
And pant for the sun
You stumble a step
And fall to the dunes.

Moment when all seems lost
The winds usher a chant
“Rise, my little one,
Your land is not far”
And so you struggle a step
With the last of your strength
And beyond the dunes
Lie the traces of hope.

12 comments:

  1. hmmmm...va tha ve, but this is not bout a traveller in the sahara

    hmmm..tha lutuk tho

    net chhe chungin ka lo comment nih hi...he2

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  2. I van fel tak!!
    Chn... I meant this poem to portray the struggles we face in life... and how we are responsible to help our own self... i myself needed some motivational mindset, and hence the composition...

    Forcing myself to hear the winds...
    “Rise, my little one,
    Your land is not far”

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  3. the 2nd and 3rd line in the 2nd stanza is a bit bewildering.. but all in all, quite ok!!

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  4. 3rd leh 4th ka tihna.. ZZZ

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  5. Comment ve dan tur ka va hre ve lo em.. matre.... anyway.. nice shot!

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  6. Hmmm ka ngaihtuah chhuah zox chu Mahatma Gandhi Birthday apiang hi "Dry Day" a ni ziah... Gel hman loha sam a ro lutuk te hian "desert look" kan ti thin... Now about the poem... a tawi ka ti tlats, mahse chhiar a nuam. Thlaler ram ro beidawnnaah pawh hian hope hi a lo awm fo reng asin.... nice poem My friend

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  7. well written...reminds me of ozymandias...love how u use the words 'moist' and 'struggle'...keep up the good work...

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  8. “Rise, my little one,
    Your land is not far” tha khop my. Interesting

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  9. ....traces of hope lie beyond the dunes...dis sumthin in life we overlooked...very inspirational....

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  10. Va discovery channel ve a. tak2 a awesome! i like. but it makes me thirsty everytime

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