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Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Why



A young man dies on a morning’s cold
His wife weeping into her hankerchief’s fold
Her hands upon her belly to which she holds
A child unborn, now deprived a father we are told.

A little girl new with a Sunday’s frock
Couldn’t find her white matching sock
The church bell rang till the clock tick-tocks
Not at church, she search for the sock that’s lost.

A woman late in her thirty years
No food on the table, just eyes full of tears
For her children – one, three and five – she fears
For her husband’s return, she knew it aint near.

An old man brushing his teeth over the basin
Looks into the mirror, into the eyes that’s sinking
Reflects over his life and regrets what he had sinned
Took some pills out of the old labelled tin.

What is it with life anyway?

Why do we cry for the unborn child?
Why do we search for the unseen sock?
Why do we wait for someone that’s gone?
Why do we live a life that’s dead?

What is it with life anyway?

31 comments:

  1. Just want to portray the ordinariness of life through this poem... the daily circle of life^^^

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    1. liked it very much..nicely composed...
      comments by munz...(rat killer)

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  2. WHY
    Why
    Why do U want to portray the ordinariness of life?

    hehe.,.,Gr8 work ThumbUpz.,.,:D

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  3. Loved the 3rd para.. I think the things mentioned are the stuff we choose to ignore, the 'underrug swept' if you may.. something about living in denial.. etc.
    And 'Why do we search for the unseen sock?', not me. I simply mix-n-match. :P

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  4. @blackestred, i got a 3yr old neice and it takes patience to dress her up... she has her own thought processing i guess.... kan thlem nasa thei tuk lom :)

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  5. very every day life spotliight... very nice to understan and simple ..... why do we wait for some one that's gone ... why do we live life that's dead ... so true so touching .. love the para of the OLD man ...

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  6. Very good work!! free verse a ni maw.

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  7. ..............loved it

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  8. "At the touch of love everyone becomes a Poet".... "why do we live a life that's day" :(

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  9. Oh... that's death... in kan thlak nge

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  10. Why was I born? What is my purpose?
    Why did I came into this world?
    I never ask for it, but it was never an option
    Where am to go from here? Why do I come till here?

    Oh, there are just so many whys in our life, idn't?? You just have to live with the flow, and enjoy what ever may come in our way. Look forward for what lies in our path. What The Nature may have in store for us.

    A beautiful poem. You did it again.

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  11. Thnx everyone^^^^ you guys keep me going, im nothing but a lone scribbler until u pple come along and breathe life to my poems... :)

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  12. well done.. great poem... keep up the good work.. :)

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  13. Very nicely put 2gether..I love the first part...it really gives you the idea of single parent in one sort of sweet bitter way..its all in one ..by far the best...

    Chhurzz1234

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  14. Good it's a Very good,, this poem that's broken my heart... Teh luam chuan...:-)

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  15. A tha lutuk,ka hnuk a ti ulh mai dawn lommmmmm

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  16. The answer to the question Why? Because God wills!

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  17. Reh loh hi, hei poem thar poh kan chhuah leh toh hi^^^

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  18. Ka'n sawi ve lawk. Heti ang poetry hi i phuah thiam tih tunah chauh ka hria! Hringnun hi, a mak a nih hi!!!

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  19. THnx @Zarzova, ziah chhoh xel kan tum dawn nia... :)

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  20. so true..bt wat wud lyf b witout d question as 2 why..."why" 3 alphabets dat helps us understand the reasons behind things...the love once lost,things unseen....damn gud poem!!!!

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  21. 'Why' is the curse that we inherited from that little garden called 'Eden'. Its what sets us free yet drives us insane. That's why it was forbidden. Yet 'Why?' was the question that got us kicked out of partying eternally with the Lord. Love your work

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