My birth
Determined
My love
Deceived
My hope
Jeopardized
My soul
Cursed
My religion
Hacked
My life
Pierced
My death
Ascertained.
My birth
Anticipated
My love
Embraced
My hope
Cultivated
My soul
Liberated
My religion
Endured
My life
Exalted
My death
Redeemed.
I guess there's always two sides to every story.... :)
ReplyDeleteyup..there sure is!!!
ReplyDeletetiang poetry hi eng 'genre' nge? chhair a nuam ...
ReplyDeletecaptures the agnostic and the believer in all of us. good stuff
ReplyDeleteso true...so libran...lol
ReplyDeleteHeti zawng hian: Padma Shree in Literature i dawn hun chuan ka la dam ka beisei.
ReplyDeleteChhiar a nuam, a dangdai, a inhmeh tur tak picture / image i dah thiam ka ti.....eng genre nge ni ta ber ang le.....?
true, former overcome by latter life. way of life
ReplyDeleteHe2 eng genre nge moni don le aw??? Its poetry... lets just put it that way... and wait for a genius to answer our question :)
ReplyDeleteAnd thnx everyone... for appreciating!!!
beautiful lines
ReplyDeleteIntelligent thought processing at work here, love it.
ReplyDeletewow bd!
ReplyDeletemiss Shakespear
ReplyDeleteWaiting for more masterpiece such as this.
ReplyDeleteB.E.A.Utiful................ Ka biography tur chu... :P
ReplyDeleteVery Creative...5 Stars
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Thnx everyone....
ReplyDeleteMy friend... You want me to criticize it. But there's none to criticize at all...
ReplyDeleteMy only criticism is that the person above me is very ugly :D
ReplyDeletea va nalh mai mai ve le aw
ReplyDeletelol @illusionaire, 'gothic' has a fragrance of its own in its ugliness... our fren here is no exception...
ReplyDelete@chuaululiana, thnx and hope ud continue to read
Iva rawn thlawh tha reuh ve..
ReplyDelete@ MS & BD Chawngthu: I ain't no genius but lemme answer your question.. this kind of poem can be called 'Couplet' but it's not the original 'Couplet' because it goes as 'a' 'b' 'a' 'b' The orginal one goes as 'a' 'a' 'b' 'b' 'c' 'c'... :-)
ReplyDelete@ BD Chawngthu: ka tan i rawn ziak chu a ni em lo maw?? :-P I just love it...
Else there's a slang name for it... it's called 'ABAB' ... or it can be 'Epic' :-) Sorry... I forgot the name given for 'ABAB' poem, but it's also called 'ABAB'
ReplyDeleteNo dear.... the poem is not meant to rhyme... nor is it lengthy narrative heroic poem, definitely not an epic...
ReplyDeleteFree Verse.... dats was it is :)
Very good poem....great mind at work!!
ReplyDelete@Bd... if You compare between @Illusionaire and Me... You know who is ugly :)))))))))
ReplyDelete:) both? Geeze im not good at guessing... one thing, lets all enjoy this poem, shall we... :)
ReplyDeleteLove it, love it, much more creative then u say u are. the concept is 1st class. Thumbsup
ReplyDeleteK'chu hei k fav poem ni ta berin k hria... :)
ReplyDeleteit shows the existentialist's point of view for me .... the writer, or should I say, the speaker in this poem searches for his or her true identity through the meanings there is in his or her life... seems to me like it is a quest to find the truth but having nowhere to be led... However, on another course transcendentalism plays its own role here too... the redemption of the soul that is there as an ending to the poem... it clearly speaks of something that suffice the speaker's erupted(troubled) thought process as seem from the previous lines... All in all, it is indeed a beautiful post modernistic poem as far as the idea is concerned as is clear from the lines itself
ReplyDeleteThanks Goosh, Muah!
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