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Whatever is written in this blog
is an outcome of fantasy put to
words, it is nothing but lies
but then again I just lied.

Thursday, July 1, 2010

One Day


If one fine day upon the Altar
Standing nervous in a white dress
I would want nothing else in this world
But you be in a black suit to my right.

(The original draft & sketch)

11 comments:

  1. This one's for The One... although i havnt found him yet :)

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  2. If one windy day upon the Altar
    standing gleeful in a tarty-red dress
    i would want nothing more in this world
    but you be on my right, just as gleeful back.

    Pasal ka nei chak tawh :(

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  3. Ha2 nei phot la chn ka nei ve ang... :)
    Ah!! Sweet Wedding...

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  4. heheeeeeeeeee kan insom ve ngei chu angai ang

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  5. Short and sweet, but beautiful and deep. What I liked about it is your use of simple words, arranged just perfectly so. Keep writing!

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  6. @Aduhi....
    Thnx. People tend to flood their writings with Huge Dictionary words, at times we are caught up trying to understan the words so much than appreciating the actual work, i chose my poetry to convey through the language of man, simple yet true from the heart.
    A work is a reflection of ourselves, and thats how i want my life to be - Simple but True :)

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  7. zualbonez... not haiku... KAiku lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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  8. hey hey go easy for that black dress guy ok. Nice piece of work.

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  9. then i would hold thy hand,
    and promise thee....
    with this ring....i thee wed
    ...my love...my life...my all...

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  10. He2 sweet huh? luv ur lines Mr.X :)
    ahhh..... life is indeed sweet....

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