I assume one wud complain on the minimal use of words but i feel there's so much you can read into from the above two lines^^^ Words are powerful, intense and strong^^^ everything what this poem is.... :)
@jeremy.... its been months i've been drafting this one... couldnt find more to add... The poem is complete in itself.... it wud be interrupting if i added my own... it is what it is... me like it though :)
I assume one wud complain on the minimal use of words but i feel there's so much you can read into from the above two lines^^^ Words are powerful, intense and strong^^^ everything what this poem is.... :)
ReplyDeletewasnt expecting it o be like this.. but still.... AWESOME!
ReplyDelete@jeremy.... its been months i've been drafting this one... couldnt find more to add... The poem is complete in itself.... it wud be interrupting if i added my own... it is what it is... me like it though :)
ReplyDeleteummm... 1st time i've seen a 2 lined poem though... haha!
ReplyDeletesimple, short, straight on point.. i like it :)
va tawi fel teh at vat a...kim vek bok sia..ngaihtuah tur t tam hle mai..:) NICE!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd I said, "Doy!"
ReplyDeletewhatta ploy..!!
ReplyDeletewOw
ReplyDeleteBoy, toy, doy, ploy Haha2 :)
ReplyDeletesays she's my ego toy
ReplyDeletetruly spoken with her ego.
ka zin hlanin i lo phuah leh hman ani maw...ka 1st hman lo..
short but very meaningful! :)
I am gentle with my ego toy,
ReplyDeleteFor breaking it, would break more than just my ego
I hul a ni maw? Akekek
ReplyDeleteDon't let yourself be an egoist toy! Big chance your ego will also get hurt!
ReplyDeleteThousand likes for d above^^^^ @illusionaire
ReplyDelete"I am gentle with my ego toy,
For breaking it, would break more than just my ego"
And Thnx @ Maisek
I bet this poem wasn't easy.. just like a preacher needs more time preparing 4 a shorter sermon.. short n effective... super like
ReplyDeleteThnx Miichael... two lines say all it need to be said^
ReplyDeletevery delicate with your choice of words. yet very soft and straight to the point
ReplyDeleteOne of the best two sentences I've read and seen.
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