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Tuesday, October 11, 2011

The Plight of a Prostitute


A thousand heartfelt laughs,
Eating to your souls fill,
Evening draws near,
You slide into your best wear,
Kneeling to the pleasures of the world,
You knock your wings off your back.
Bouncing to the beat of the groove
You fill your heart with the best
And it’s never enough to keep
Eyeing for flesh to fill your thirst.

For trading flesh earns you reward
Of wealth and of worldly pleasures
A taste of a rich man’s luxury
Of splendid rushes down your spines
All at once beneath your rusted halo
Surfaced the hidden crave of lust,
And so you sell your soul among the feeds
As if tomorrow is a forbidden destiny.
Deadly Sins fly about
Watching you sin even more,
Until your soul could contain
No more and you Collapse.



One such a thousand hurtful nights
She sleeps away her weariness,
While the rest of the world complains
Cursing the flashing red light
As a major defect among the good,
The best and the perfect.
She couldn’t care less of what people say
For life is one way for people who swing
Between life and survival,
Lest what they want is death.


Nobody cares to ponder her stake,
Nobody cares to offer her a choice,
Nobody cares to admire the art
Of this humble damsel yet so noble
To have accepted her profession a gift
That put food on one’s humble keep,
That earns her simple pleasures
The best way she knows how to.
And if society should judge
How she keeps her humble life alive,
Should we not judge how society judge her
With a thousand mocking laughs?

16 comments:

  1. there are several layers....when it comes down to "Hunger"

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  2. wonder who ur writing abt? hmmm :)

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  3. HuHu...dek Nice thei vel bok sia..^_^..keep it up :D

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  4. "For trading flesh earns you reward
    Of wealth and of worldly pleasures
    A taste of a rich man’s luxury
    Of splendid rushes down your spines"

    Liked it..neatly written with a pacey turn of events. Excellent.

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  5. As awesome as it is, maybe could do with more rhymes..kzp

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  6. @ ___ K

    Dis poem is for everyone, not for a specific audience in particular... the thought that maybe Hey... there's always two sides of the same story, so i thought to myself, why not write the story less told by society... hence this poem...

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  7. Love how you bring out the insatiable hunger of lusts,the short, delusional yet fleeting feeling of "a rich man's luxury", the 'rusted halo'..'As if tomorrow is a forbidden destiny'... (OMG! where did u get ur genes from?... smooth lines!Love em!)

    "Nobody cares to ponder her stake,
    Nobody cares to offer her a choice,
    Nobody cares to admire the art
    Of this humble damsel yet so noble"
    ^--- i think so too, we tend to judge or maybe sympathize when their need is truly "Empathy" as you've shown... "Should we not judge how society judge her
    With a thousand mocking laughs?"...

    Great Read!

    p.s. (sola here)...I read it over and over again!

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  8. sorry, but me thinks rhymes are BC... :)

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  9. AM SO PROUD OF U BD...I ALWAYS WANTED TO WRITE ABOUT THEM. SIMPLY I WANNA SAY I VAN THIAM VE O ...KEEP WRITING BEST OF LUCK. GOD BLESS U:)

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  10. "It ain't there childhood dream
    It ain't what they dream to become"

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  11. Like.... like i like you.....lol

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  12. hmmmm.....va deep ve aw! thums up

    -zualbonez

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  13. Very very ngaihnawm. Poet tha tak i ni der tawh alawm.





    One way of earning a living. One's gotta do what's gotta be done :)

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  14. va chawchawrawi ve hehehe...a tha viau tho e

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