To have sweated
it all out
And find
success.
Some people are lucky
To have kept the faith
And be enlightened.
Some people are lucky
To have found love
And
embrace it.
Some people are lucky
To have cracked the
code
And find genius.
Some people
are lucky
To have
survived a storm
And live to
celebrate.
Some people are lucky
To have born with a tune
And sing their heart’s melody.
Some people are lucky
To have adorned the
palette
And express
themselves.
Maybe I too am lucky
To have found a pen
And a paper to write
with.
104 words. "And express themselves".... tih hi "And express them" ni zawk em hehehe... Modern Pi Hmuaki...a ropui... Kan pu notesheet ziah dan ang takin...please go on!!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Pu Ellis, ih "Book of the Year" i dawng trep toh ang nangpawh!
Delete1st comment tu hi va pawimawh em...
DeleteNIce agn...
ReplyDeleteVery Nice this one is way in another level than the others.. Jut love the ending part.. It nice keep it up
wish i had more words.. but damn i dont... hope NICE will suffice, coz its comming straight from d heart....
ReplyDeletesweat top ka u :)
ReplyDeleteSome people are lucky
ReplyDeleteTo have born with a tune
And sing their heart’s melody.
How's dat? big boy
somehow ur lines make me feel lucky... nicey
ReplyDeletewohhooo..nice nice...but the level of effort in each of your examples differ..some are based on pure luck and some with ass wrenching hardwork :) heheh
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They are based on my circle of friends, lucky aint they?
Deletei sense a trick kwestion here hehehe
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