If you’re wondering how she’s doing I don’t know either,
I heard she’s busy doing the household chores.
Some say she’s out there with a friend or two,
But I believe she’s been places and quite content.
If you’re wondering how she’s doing don’t ask me,
I haven’t seen her since you left her so.
Some say she often cries to wet her pillow,
I doubt it, for some say she never look so happy.
If you’re wondering how she’s doing I’ll tell you later,
For now I’m busy driving my life and tuning the radio.
“She’s a Dreamer…” sang the radioman with an acoustic guitar,
“I know she will make it cause’ she’s a Survivor.”
clap clap....tha hle mai... tunlai chu rilru kal tluang leh deuh....
ReplyDeleteVan kual nasa ve
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.....
ReplyDeletewow wow wow...ka va han duh em...your old magic is back this is just so so beautiful...it's got that certain sad ethereal detachment...can't exactly describe it but the notes just hit you..
ReplyDeleteagain wow!
nice nice.... keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThnx Guys.....
ReplyDeletea nalh ve reuh lutuk...
ReplyDeleteLove this one. Reads like a song.
ReplyDelete*like*
ReplyDeletewhich Radio station btw :)
Beautiful....and i was just wondering........
ReplyDeleteI like this poem too... tis written on a cold February morning at 6am... almost all my poems are composed daytime or by night, this one greets the morning sun^ i just love it :)
ReplyDeleteti mi ve riau mai a. bravo... felliqq
ReplyDeleteThnx felliqq... lo phuah sak ve ang CHE u :D
ReplyDeletetha hle mai
ReplyDelete"I know she will make it cause’ she’s a Survivor.”
ReplyDeletevery ril my fren.... sorry ka comment hman lawk loa.... very nice keep it up
beautiful, the kind of poem i like. easy to read, easy to understand, simple but at the same time has many hidden meanings. and btw have you ever thought of getting your work published?
ReplyDeleteYup! My dream to publish one. Soon as i hav enuf for a collection, will do, in the near future^ although i'll be needing a lot of help and advise. Maybe ya all can help me :D
ReplyDeleteexquisite......
ReplyDeleteSkrutiniza
Aduhi: simple but at the same time has many hidden meanings
ReplyDeleteyup that's the main reason why I love reading BD's work. My only complain is that, most of the time, her updates are not frequent or regular :( I only hope she keeps feeding us with her specialty. I know, I know, masterpieces take time to be moulded, but being the addict that I am to her work, I carve only more everyday :(
*crave*
ReplyDeletesilly grin :D
She'll make it...one day
ReplyDelete@Mikey, hope she does...
ReplyDeleteIf she’s a Survivor.. are you? :D
ReplyDeletenice poem with deep thoughts...keep it up sweety:)
ReplyDelete@Chda, im looking for the radioman :)
ReplyDeletemaybe u're looking at the wrong place.. :D
ReplyDeleteHe2...maybe :)
ReplyDeleteOne of the Bast poems 4, me very rare perspective at this particular theme ... Relates 2 me some how hehe.. keep it up
ReplyDeleteThnx Michael... appreciated^
ReplyDeleteim just plain mad u quoted 'ozzy' and 'beyonce' in one paragraph....
ReplyDeletecome on.... u can do better than this!!!
u've done it so many times before.....
and by 'quote' i mean poetically misused your poetic license.. i hope im not too harsh,
ReplyDeleteits just that ive been following your work..
and im starting to sense that you are starting to take it for granted, with all the rave reviews and such.....
Dear uris, thnx for being the kinda critic dat i look forward to, appreciated.
ReplyDeletePoetry for me is to let out what i feel within, im not Mrs.Shakespeare or anything, i may be goofy, wacky, intact or emotional at times, so is my poetry.
So long as the words 'dreamer' and 'survivor' find a slot in the English Dictionary, i thought i might use it as well.
I would not apologize if my poetry doesn't suffice ur taste, it does mine :D Ty
Am just wondering... Are u the girl in the poem.?? :)
ReplyDeleteThe girl could be anybody, could have been anyone's story :)
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