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Sunday, November 28, 2010

Magic



When first we met we were like magic,
You cast a spell on me that kept me warm.
I was happy, loved and cherished,
I don’t know how we could lose all that.
Moments when I was down in tears
You were always willing to drown with me,
When I failed to hit the right notes
You played your magic to hide the wrongs.
You stood by my side and never let go
All the way through thick and thin,
I was safe, content and at peace
Until we lost the magic and trade it for hate.
Now I’m all alone in this angered world,
Nothing to win, nothing to lose,
What is life when it’s without you?
I have become a witch of my own kind.
My blood is angered and lost its glow,
The magic is gone and all I remember
Is how to take a knife and press it close
To a witch’s heart, full of gloom.
And so in darkness I decline to death
Bidding farewell to the once precious orb,
Precious Magic Orb – The life of us!!!
Gone as it drained from my heart.

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27 comments:

  1. emestiNovember 28, 2010 at 4:11 PM

    wow!!!!this is fantastic...never could really imagine how hard it'll be...but think i get a glimpse of it through this "MAGIC" :)

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  2. Bd ChawngthuNovember 28, 2010 at 4:14 PM

    Precious Magic Orb – The life of us!!!
    Gone as it drained from my heart.

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  3. Becca ChhangteNovember 28, 2010 at 4:25 PM

    Fantastic...superb...heart-touching as well as imaginative...the birth of a new,great poet :)

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  4. Valpuia SailoNovember 28, 2010 at 4:28 PM

    Beautiful...

    And so in darkness I decline to death
    Bidding farewell to the once precious orb,
    Precious Magic Orb – The life of us!!!
    Gone as it drained from my heart

    ... khi a gothic ka ti

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  5. Bd ChawngthuNovember 28, 2010 at 4:33 PM

    @gothica
    Chu vang reng... ka xiak ka xiak a.... then it turned out this way... k hrechhuak xawk che lom... i hope u like it :)

    @Becca Thnx

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  6. Valpuia SailoNovember 28, 2010 at 4:36 PM

    lolzzz @Bd... melancholy is sometimes linked to death.... but not necessarily... so gothic :P

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  7. UnknownNovember 28, 2010 at 5:06 PM

    Fear not, dear Juliet, your Romeo's calling
    He's waiting for you at the end of the song,
    This world was too cruel... for lovers like you,
    But here in our hearts you'll always live on...

    Walls built between us,
    Miles separate us,
    Yet in our hearts, we share the same dream...
    Feelings so strong,
    We just must carry on,
    On to our Magical World...

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  8. HendriXNovember 28, 2010 at 5:15 PM

    a van mawi em2 ve a...... every line khi ka duh top,...a top lam khi,.. soo sad,.,. :( touching top...

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  9. Bd ChawngthuNovember 28, 2010 at 5:30 PM

    Wow @jeremy.... love ur Romeo Juliet words^^^ So true, so sweet... so soothing^

    @HendriX, chuti maw, thnx :)

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  10. MoiaNovember 28, 2010 at 6:22 PM

    Fire bolt or chain lightning?? lol...nice...love the title...

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  11. Bd ChawngthuNovember 28, 2010 at 7:27 PM

    Well, the title is what everything is and is not...

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  12. zualbonezNovember 29, 2010 at 10:40 AM

    When I failed to hit the right notes
    You played your magic to hide the wrongs

    -swett khawp mai.

    i last verse khi a gothic khawp mai : seriously:

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  13. ChdaNovember 29, 2010 at 11:02 AM

    a thluk siam tawh em.. siam la... hehe... tu tan tak dedicate ang che maw.. :D

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  14. Bd ChawngthuNovember 29, 2010 at 11:24 AM

    @zualbonez: k line duh lai tak i rawn quote chhuak mawle :) Nia, last verse khi gothic khop mai, but dats really how the magic's gone...

    @chda: a thluk siam lam hi chu ka chanpual a ni lo hrim2 :)

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  15. lalNovember 29, 2010 at 5:44 PM

    cast away thy distraught fair lady
    the orb may be gone nay the magic
    in solitude it awaits a new turn
    to your left a new lover's born
    loosen thy attire and don this robe
    your new lover's throne is thine place
    a magical world blossoming in thine essence

    -ZB

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  16. lalNovember 29, 2010 at 5:44 PM

    the above is me zualbonez :grin:

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  17. Bd ChawngthuNovember 29, 2010 at 9:24 PM

    lol... hria lom... @lal
    Me like your lines :thanks:millions:

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  18. Kaptea FanaiNovember 30, 2010 at 12:17 PM

    Va tha ve o...ka hrethiam pha meuhlo ni e

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  19. AnonymousNovember 30, 2010 at 12:30 PM

    And so in darkness I decline to death
    Bidding farewell to the once precious orb,
    Precious Magic Orb – The life of us!!!
    Gone as it drained from my heart.

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  20. AlejendroNovember 30, 2010 at 12:46 PM

    Abaraca-dabra

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  21. mafakaDecember 1, 2010 at 3:18 PM

    The Best of Bd.The magic is gone

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  22. blackestredDecember 2, 2010 at 1:55 PM

    When the magic subsides yet the feelings remain,
    When what was once Love is replaced by Hatred,
    Remember that Indifference, not Hate is the opposite of Love,
    And nonetheless if there are still feelings, there is still a chance....

    Nice read, btw.. will be back..

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  23. MaisekDecember 3, 2010 at 7:51 PM

    I prefer to forget the one who hurt me yesterday! I'd rather think of the one who offers me magical love today!

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  24. Bd ChawngthuDecember 3, 2010 at 11:13 PM

    Dik MAisek^^^^ Dik latak!!!!

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  25. AnonymousDecember 9, 2010 at 6:09 PM

    inspiration much...
    hei chuan mi emotion a chawk tho nasa ve aww...
    hei hi poetry dik tak.
    clap clap..
    btw... magic is never lost---- Bd Chawngthu....
    it only move from sight, it is always there to be rediscovered....

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  26. AnonymousDecember 15, 2010 at 11:17 AM

    "When I failed to hit the right notes
    You played your magic to hide the wrongs."

    Magic is a trick!!Well sweety,,,you've been tricked!!But Tricks are somewhat entertaining sometimes....And thanks a bunch for sharing yet another awesome piece of your mind....Love every bit of it.

    (\_/)
    (0.o) Skrutiniza....
    '(__)'

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  27. Bd ChawngthuDecember 15, 2010 at 2:30 PM

    Thnx Skrutiniza.... luv it when ur part of this blog :)

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